READING ADAPTATIONS, FICTIONAL CANDIDATES

Draft A, intentionally defective:
The Library is north of the School. Take the red path, which is the safe route. Each square is 0.5 metres. May has 35 centimetres of rain. Choose the best route.

Draft B, candidate for checking against LC1/S1:
The Library is two grid units east and two north of the School. Each grid unit stands for 0.5 kilometres. Route A has four grid units; Route B has eight. Use the scale to calculate both distances. Compare your results. The fictional rainfall totals are April 20 mm, May 35 mm and June 25 mm.

Review guide, read after your own comparison:
A omits east, invents safety, relies on colour, changes km to metres and mm to centimetres, and replaces a defined comparison with an unspecified best choice. B preserves the listed task evidence and leaves the calculations to the learner. B is not a universal comprehension or accessibility guarantee. Check all relevant source claims, actual use and individual needs through appropriate human processes.
